Here’s what bothers American companies the most on resumes, according to a new book called Resume Magic.
- Leaving out dates
 - No chronological listing of work
 - Overstatement of responsibility
 - Too much detail, usually re: job descriptions
 - Summary of work history by type rather than listing the exact company and job performed
 - Baseless description of personal strengths
 - Entitlement mentality (“I have a degree, I’m smart, what can you do for me?”)
 - No accomplishments listed, just duties
 - Accomplishments don’t describe where and when they were made
 - Pumped up to look like candidate has more qualifications than s/he really does
 - Accomplishments separate from work history so it’s not clear what was done where
 - Fancy fonts
 - Photos included
 - Graphics
 - Typos
 - Misspelling
 - Fluffy words
 - Bad grammar
 - Incomplete sentences
 - Disorganized
 - Too long
 - Two pages for beginners
 - Poor organization
 - Lack of clear direction, focus
 - Covering up or lying about gaps in employment or lack of degree
 
SOURCE: JIST Works, Inc., Indianapolis, January 4, 1999. Resume Magic covers virtually every element of resume making.